I’ve been reading Moby-Dick again, one of my all-time favourite gloomy novels (of which I have a surprisingly large number). But what I didn’t know was that academics have recently discovered an early draft, an unfinished manuscript in which Melville evidently first set the novel in the herring fishing, and not that of the whale. In this extract Ahab addresses the skipper of another boat:
“That ship ahoy! This is Captain Ahab of the Pequod out of Nantucket!”
“The who of the what now?”
“The Pequod! Out of Nantucket.”
“It says ‘Saucy Sue’ on the side.”
“Aye, well, I’ve been meaning to get that painted.”
“And the registration’s a Wick number.”
“Avast there! Hast seen the White Herring?”
“The what?”
“The White Herring! Hast thou seen Spotted Dick?”
“Look, mate, herrings are sort of silvery and scaly. You know, as in that’s why they’re called the silver darlings?”
“This one has a snow-white head, a crooked jaw and a hump shaped like a pyramid on his back.”
“We’re still talking about a herring, here? Thing about the size and shape of a large carrot?”
“Aye, and we’re on a damned cruise to hunt him down.”
“But what on earth dost thou—I mean, do you—want with him?”
“Seest thou this leg? That devil in piscine form dismasted me off Japan.”
“Now, when you say he dismasted you…?”
“Took this leg clean off.”
“A herring did that?”
“They’re vicious beggers when you arouse their hunting instincts.”
“And this herring took off your leg?”
“Aye.”
“That leg you’re standing on, you mean?”
“Aye.”
“But, and I want you to follow me closely here, it looks fine.”
“No it doesn’t.”
“Yes it does. Look, there’s a great big tear in your trousers! I can see your leg clean through it.”
[An awkward pause ensues]
“Ahahaha, well, when I say he dismasted me, I mean he gave me a nasty nip on the finger once. Broke the skin and everything.”
“Really.”
“Stung rather a lot, I can tell thee. For, oh, at least a minute. And so I’m hunting him down in his capacity as God’s agent in order to wreak my vengeance on God himself!”
“Um, no offence but has it ever occurred to you that you might be over-thinking this?”
“Bah! I see thou canst tell me nothing.”
[Other skipper to himself, muttering] “Thou’rt a looney, I can tell thee that much.”
“Avast!” [Ahab turns to his crew] “Ship oars, Queequeg.”
“I keep telling you, my name’s Sebastian and I just paid for a short cruise around the harbour.”
“Hush, Queequeg, never be ashamed of who thou art. Now, Starbuck, where’s my coffee..?”
Sadly the manuscript breaks off there; and so it remains one of the great, tantalising what-ifs of literature…
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TECHNICAL STUFF
I’ve finished the back, my standard eight inches from dividing front and back to the start of the shoulder straps. And now we can see it whole, the simple repetition of the pattern really pays off; and very striking it looks.
I usually divide each side into threes at the shoulders, one-third each for the two shoulders and the collar. As there are 179 stitches per side I’d intended to make the shoulders 60 stitches each and the collar 59, but owing to taking my eye off the ball at the crucial moment (reader, I just lost concentration) I have 58 stitches on each shoulder and a slightly wider collar of 63; not that it matters, especially as I don’t like tight necklines. Next week we turn it over and do it all again for the front.
A handsome gansey, indeed.
It’s probably safer to hunt the white herring than the snark, though the herring fisherman seems snarky enough to qualify.
Hi Tamar, hunting the snark sone thing; but what if the snark is a boojum…?
I’m moderately sure this captain is the same guy who came through here a few years ago in his Lands End outfit looking for our hoop snake.
Give’im no quarter!
Hi Nancy, 🙂
I had look up “hoop snake”, which was a new one on me. I love the idea that the best way to escape is to hide behind a tree, which the snake will sting instead of you, causing the tree to die. Which, of course, is how I escape from snakes in general. (I’m puzzled how it’s supposed to move, though: where does the momentum come from? I mean, fair enough, it grasps its tail in its mouth—but why doesn’t it then just fall over…?)
My small knitting group of three is reading and discussing MD at our weekly knitup; I call it Knit and Dick. We are Amuricans from Vermont, but can see Mt. Greylock to the south in the town of Pittsfield, Massachusetts where Melville lived. He wrote in his second floor room which faces north overlooking Greylock. It was winter and the mountain was snow-covered. Inspiration for the white whale, so told.
Hi Carole, oh I do love Moby Dick (can you tell?). Yes, some of the biology can get tedious, and as a vegetarian I find the killing and dismembering uncomfortable, but my god, what a book! The final showdown with the White Whale still raises the hairs on the back of my neck. I’ve been listening to the audiobook read by William Hootkins who does a remarkable job with all the characters and dialects and uses his voice to stop it getting “samey”.
I often think how nice it would be if Melville had actually received some of the fame and royalties he deserved for Moby Dick, instead of seeing it fail completely and regard himself as a failure. As a wise man said once, “there ain’t no justice…”
At least his earlier books, _Typee_ and _Omoo_, were reasonably popular.
Thanks for the chuckle . . . do knitters read at all or are we all listening these days?